How to Write an English Jueju
1. Only use monosyllabic words. Surprisingly, English has one of the largest vocabularies of monosyllabic words.
2. Choose words that are imagistic. Here the saying “show, don’t tell” is in full effect, but the good news is that monosyllabic words rank high in imageability as they often refer to concrete things. Classical Chinese poetry rarely includes function words like articles, which are called empty words in Chinese like (like “the” or “a”).
4. 遵循AABA 的格律：六，月，道，速
3. When composing a 5-character Jueju poem, pair your imagistic words in groups of 2+3. When composing a 7-character Jueju, pair your images into groups of 2+2+3 word units. Here are some examples: Dark (adj.) + moss (n.) (&) pale (adj) + limbs (n.) is a couple of pairs. Wind + bends + trees is a final unit. The point is that the words within each unit should stick more closely to each other than to words from different units. For instance, “limbs + wind” do not connect as well as “wind + bends.” The goal is to build units that hold together in this pattern.
4. Observe the rhyme scheme of AABA: June, moon, path, soon. English does not have tones like Chinese, so one only needs to follow basic end-rhymes. English vowels in the Song Dynasty room are split into yin/yang categories based on whether they are long (“log”) or short (“lock”), but this rule need not apply to the basic English Jueju. When the rules are strictly followed, one would want the unrhymed word to be short if the rhymed words are long and vice versa.
5. Thematic progression: Observe the thematic progression of lines following the sequence below:
Line One: Introduce a scene (often a scene in nature)
Line Two: Extend and deepen the scene
Line Three: Introduce a shift or turn (often revealing something of the poet’s inner feelings or about the human world in general).
Classical Chinese poetry thrives on an implicit relationship between the nature presented in the first two lines and the inner emotional world of human beings presented in the third line.
6. Parallelism: Vertical matching of grammar and of meaning and tones.
Lines must relate to one another vertically by matching nouns with nouns in the same position within the lines (for instance, “grass” and “weeds”), and adjectives with adjectives, verbs to verbs, particles to particles. In the case of the first two lines, the parallelism should reveal a similarity; in the second and third lines they should reveal a dichotomy, difference, or opposition. The fourth line must not be parallel or anti-parallel.
The author of the poem here has fulfilled all the requirements of Classical Chinese Regulated Verse in English by following the rules established by the rime tables. She has followed a strict pattern of alternating yin and yang vowels. Hollow circles indicate the yang (long) vowels, and solid circles the yin (short) vowels.
The poet has also balanced the meaning of words through strict vertical parallelism and anti-parallelism (“cold” and “brisk” against “warm”) while keeping the rhyme scheme and thematic progression.